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NotesJoke

Takes me a while to cum

jokesexself-deprecationtried
Statuspotluck-tested
Topicsexual performance, self-deprecation

It takes me a while to cum I sure hope I can do it before the end of this set

Stage notes

- Plant early in set, payoff later when legs visibly shake from nerves - Payoff: "my legs aren't shaking because I'm nervous. I'm just cumming really hard right now" - Reframes a real vulnerability (visible nerves) as the joke landing - Payoff only works if audience remembers the plant — consider a mid-set callback or explicit callback in the payoff line

Related

- She Comes First — complementary sex material - my penis doesn't work — same self-deprecation lane - Why I can't get hard — performance anxiety theme

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