Characters
Characters
David has a strong instinct for character work, developed through clown training, improv (Groundlings), and stand-up. Characters appear in sketch form, as recurring personas in bits, and as named concept seeds.
Named Characters and Personas
The Jew from the Future
The most fully developed character in the vault. Circumcised by lightsaber. Has a toaster wife named Gladys. Performs for dolphins. Knows exactly when Miami goes underwater. See Future-and-Sci-Fi-Bits for full breakdown.
Smoking Joe
"Smokes. Is fucking Smoking Joe. Puffs as he's about to say something but takes his time. People lose their shit around him." — Character mega listThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all.
A pure status character — the slow reveal. This is a clown archetype: the person who controls the room through stillness and delay.
The Coach
"Wearing sports pants, high-waisted polo tucked... [enters room]" — Coach comes into roomThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all. — one-line character intro in a note title. The specific costume detail (high-waisted polo, tucked) is a good instinct.
Athena the Hacker
"Would be very funny to use words like 'honeypot'" — Bit builderThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all.. A female hacker character named Athena. The sexual double meaning of hacker jargon is the premise. Underdeveloped.
Booker Dialogue / Jonah Kugelbaum
"Hey this Jonah Kugelbaum, Geshmak Comedy..." — Booker dialogueThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all. — appears to be a comic character/sketch about a comedy booker with an extremely Jewish name. The name itself is the joke.
Bombo Belford
Two video links, no text — Bombo BelfordThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all.. Appears to be an existing character (videos referenced) rather than a concept note.
The Clown Archetypes David Has Studied
From Clown character notesThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all. (Mark's class): - High status vs. low status - The tripper and the responder - "The small wrestler who knows he can beat you up and is upset you don't believe him" — Clown bitThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all. — this is a perfect clown character description - The person who refuses to acknowledge the other character exists
The Catskills Comedian (as Character)
David performs as a Borscht Belt comic — the impression: "The soup is good! This hotel is nice but more expensive than it should be" — Borscht Belt ComedyThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all.. A character through which he can comment on Jewish comedy heritage.
Character Categories / Lists
- Characters - bitsThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all.: characters used as bit vehicles - Character zooThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all.: multiple characters together - Character contrastThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all.: characters defined by contrast with each other - Character way to walkThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all.: physical character development via gait - Character.mdThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all.: "2 chassis ish men, modern gen z lingo to who love almond real estate development" — a very short sketch seed with enormous potential
Character Concepts (Underdeveloped)
- An exploration about presenting in different stage personasThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all. — meta-concept about having multiple performance identities - EverettThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all.: "Everett looks like Harry Potter if Harry's scar was from rectal bleeding" — roast character, someone David knows - James LindberghThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all. — mentioned as a name/person - Larry David lookalike goes on datesThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all. — strong concept: someone who looks like Larry David navigating dating - Mango manThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all. — named character, no content - Dwaine silvercruiseThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all. — named character
Impression Work
- Impression TuesdayThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all. — recurring writing session - Impression wish listThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all. — characters David wants to do impressions of - Austin powers performanceThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all. / Austin powers scene noteThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all. — character performance/sketch planning
Captain Sinai
References a PDF: Captain Sinai- EPISODE 2.pdfThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all. — implies this is an ongoing scripted character with at least 2 episodes. Superhero or military character with Jewish Israeli-coded name. Could be a scripted series project.
Character as World-Building
Several notes suggest David thinks about characters not just as stand-up props but as the seeds of a wider creative universe: - Ludo (the umbrella brand concept) as a home for "characters" across show formats - The "Davey Show" featuring multiple performers suggests a character-ensemble show - "An investigative journalist's retrospective on colonizing the moon" — An investigative journalist's retrospectiveThis file never made it to this site. There's some truly random shit I write in my notes and I can't share it all. — a character premise for a longer piece
Patterns
- David's strongest characters are archetypes with one surprising detail (Smoking Joe's slowness; the toaster wife; the mohel who just wanted tips and bagels) - Names matter: Jonah Kugelbaum, Bombo Belford, Gladys the toaster wife — these are characters from naming alone - The clown training gives David a rigorous vocabulary for character: high/low status, games, obstacles, slow motion — these tools are available to him on stage - Real people as characters: Everett, people at shows, rabbis — David is comfortable making real people in his life into comic characters
Connections
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